Thirteen Years of Service
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RE: should I add to this? 02-28-2014, 04:18 PM
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Personally I would either change the red color of the text or move it away from the hat, the colors are similar so it kinda blends in and makes it hard to read and of course remove the white outline
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Twelve Years of Service
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RE: should I add to this? 02-28-2014, 04:19 PM
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Thanks. yeah the red in the text is a masked canadian flag
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don't have much in the first place, who feel the new currents and ride them the farthest.
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Thirteen Years of Service
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RE: should I add to this? 02-28-2014, 04:34 PM
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Not bad but I think you should hire XxGreenLantrenxX for this or even ask for his suggestion. Saying this because he's good at his GFX
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Thirteen Years of Service
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RE: should I add to this? 03-01-2014, 05:43 AM
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Heres a list of things I noticed-
The font does not match the frame.
The text alignment is bad.
The Renders are LQ.
Adding a clipping mask to the text does not seem to be working well.
Keep doing GFX and you'll get better.
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Twelve Years of Service
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RE: should I add to this? 03-01-2014, 06:00 AM
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Thanks everyone for the tips! This crap starts on monday so I can't do much
It's often the outcasts, the iconoclasts ... those who have the least to lose because they
don't have much in the first place, who feel the new currents and ride them the farthest.
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