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should I add to this? - Inori - 02-28-2014 So, my school (french) is having a winter carnival and I made this for it. Should I add anything or keep it as is? (I don't really want to show it off b/c I'm not super proud of it) (and yes, I know there's a white outline on the snowman) RE: should I add to this? - chmod - 02-28-2014 Personally I would either change the red color of the text or move it away from the hat, the colors are similar so it kinda blends in and makes it hard to read and of course remove the white outline RE: should I add to this? - Inori - 02-28-2014 Thanks. yeah the red in the text is a masked canadian flag RE: should I add to this? - The Real Slim Shady - 02-28-2014 Quebecois eh. hmmmm RE: should I add to this? - Ex094 - 02-28-2014 Not bad but I think you should hire XxGreenLantrenxX for this or even ask for his suggestion. Saying this because he's good at his GFX RE: should I add to this? - Inori - 02-28-2014 @Geoff I'm not french just canadian and thanks @Ex094 I'll ask. RE: should I add to this? - AxwellMix - 03-01-2014 What program do you use to make these? The white line around the picture, is that suppose to be there? The picture is also quite pixelated and stretched! suggestion - search up some tutorials on how to clean up stretched pictures! I would also advise against the 100% opacity black shadow as it doesn't do anything for the text - instead use a black stroke around the text(not to big though!). Other than that, good start! (Used Photoshop for years now, currently studying digital design/animation) RE: should I add to this? - TheDeceptionist - 03-01-2014 Heres a list of things I noticed- The font does not match the frame. The text alignment is bad. The Renders are LQ. Adding a clipping mask to the text does not seem to be working well. Keep doing GFX and you'll get better. RE: should I add to this? - Inori - 03-01-2014 Thanks everyone for the tips! This crap starts on monday so I can't do much