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should I add to this? #1
So, my school (french) is having a winter carnival and I made this for it. Should I add anything or keep it as is?
(I don't really want to show it off b/c I'm not super proud of it) (and yes, I know there's a white outline on the snowman)
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RE: should I add to this? #2
Personally I would either change the red color of the text or move it away from the hat, the colors are similar so it kinda blends in and makes it hard to read and of course remove the white outline
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RE: should I add to this? #3
Thanks. yeah the red in the text is a masked canadian flag
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RE: should I add to this? #4
Quebecois eh. hmmmm

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RE: should I add to this? #5
Not bad but I think you should hire XxGreenLantrenxX for this or even ask for his suggestion. Saying this because he's good at his GFX
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RE: should I add to this? #6
@Geoff I'm not french just canadian Tongue and thanks @Ex094 I'll ask.
It's often the outcasts, the iconoclasts ... those who have the least to lose because they
don't have much in the first place, who feel the new currents and ride them the farthest.

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RE: should I add to this? #7
What program do you use to make these? Smile

The white line around the picture, is that suppose to be there?
The picture is also quite pixelated and stretched! suggestion - search up some tutorials on how to clean up stretched pictures!
I would also advise against the 100% opacity black shadow as it doesn't do anything for the text - instead use a black stroke around the text(not to big though!).

Other than that, good start! Biggrin
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RE: should I add to this? #8
Heres a list of things I noticed-

The font does not match the frame.
The text alignment is bad.
The Renders are LQ.
Adding a clipping mask to the text does not seem to be working well.
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RE: should I add to this? #9
Thanks everyone for the tips! This crap starts on monday so I can't do much
It's often the outcasts, the iconoclasts ... those who have the least to lose because they
don't have much in the first place, who feel the new currents and ride them the farthest.

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