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I went through and changed a few words around to add more emphasis, also fixed grammar and spelling. Didn't change up "rumours" as I figured you're not from the states.

I noticed that you tried to over exaggerate your writing, it was great, though you should keep in mind to not be too overly dramatic. It seemed as if you were drifting into a redundancy spree in the middle of it.

Just work on your tenses and keep in mind to try to keep things simple, yet enigmatic; draw the reader in with few words only to have their imagination run wild as they try to comprehend what comes next.

I appreciate your efforts. You have a few things wrong (ex. the giants are not stone) but I do see where I could fix some of my wording.
EDIT: I went ahead and fixed it with some of your changes.

Yeah I figured I'd get things wrong. But looking good so far dude.