[Esoterith]

Decent job @82, though in my opinion you tried too much to make the title "Thread Design" stand out, by adding a hash outer glow/dropshadow.

The font you use is a bit, overused, but good to start. Attempt to center everything and make the distance from the sides symmetrical. For the background image, I'd suggest either finding a higher res or going with a solid color. A typo "Benifits" >> "Benefits." Try to decrease the text size, a bit too large in my opinion, and then increase the distance between everything. It's like everything is crowded, but there's a lot of space to use.

Nice job though. 7/10 for first time.

Its my first time using Photoshop ever xd