First Ever Attempt at a Thread Design

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First Ever Attempt at a Thread Design - Esoterith - 06-26-2016

Feedback?

- The payment logos look weird on it!
- Typo on "Design"

RE: First Ever Attempt at a Thread Design - Aiko - 06-26-2016

YAY i am in the TD, Awesome work for your first try bro.

Keep at it and you will get better

RE: First Ever Attempt at a Thread Design - Esoterith - 06-26-2016

(06-26-2016, 03:25 AM)Choopie Wrote: YAY i am in the TD, Awesome work for your first try bro.

Keep at it and you will get better

Thanks fam!

RE: First Ever Attempt at a Thread Design - Silence - 06-26-2016

Decent job @82, though in my opinion you tried too much to make the title "Thread Design" stand out, by adding a hash outer glow/dropshadow.

The font you use is a bit, overused, but good to start. Attempt to center everything and make the distance from the sides symmetrical. For the background image, I'd suggest either finding a higher res or going with a solid color. A typo "Benifits" >> "Benefits." Try to decrease the text size, a bit too large in my opinion, and then increase the distance between everything. It's like everything is crowded, but there's a lot of space to use.

Nice job though. 7/10 for first time. Smile

RE: First Ever Attempt at a Thread Design - Esoterith - 06-26-2016

(06-26-2016, 03:36 AM)Silence Wrote: Decent job @82, though in my opinion you tried too much to make the title "Thread Design" stand out, by adding a hash outer glow/dropshadow.

The font you use is a bit, overused, but good to start. Attempt to center everything and make the distance from the sides symmetrical. For the background image, I'd suggest either finding a higher res or going with a solid color. A typo "Benifits" >> "Benefits." Try to decrease the text size, a bit too large in my opinion, and then increase the distance between everything. It's like everything is crowded, but there's a lot of space to use.

Nice job though. 7/10 for first time.

Its my first time using Photoshop ever xd

RE: First Ever Attempt at a Thread Design - Silence - 06-26-2016

(06-26-2016, 03:38 AM)Jay Wrote:
(06-26-2016, 03:36 AM)Silence Wrote: Decent job @82, though in my opinion you tried too much to make the title "Thread Design" stand out, by adding a hash outer glow/dropshadow.

The font you use is a bit, overused, but good to start. Attempt to center everything and make the distance from the sides symmetrical. For the background image, I'd suggest either finding a higher res or going with a solid color. A typo "Benifits" >> "Benefits." Try to decrease the text size, a bit too large in my opinion, and then increase the distance between everything. It's like everything is crowded, but there's a lot of space to use.

Nice job though. 7/10 for first time.

Its my first time using Photoshop ever xd

Rip. Be sure you save in PNG as well. I saw on another post you didn't know how, so Google is your friend. Smile

I'm really new at thread designs too, my application for Soleil is one of my first that I've tried on and is what I'm most proud of so far.

RE: First Ever Attempt at a Thread Design - Esoterith - 06-26-2016

(06-26-2016, 03:40 AM)Silence Wrote:
(06-26-2016, 03:38 AM)Jay Wrote:
(06-26-2016, 03:36 AM)Silence Wrote: Decent job @82, though in my opinion you tried too much to make the title "Thread Design" stand out, by adding a hash outer glow/dropshadow.

The font you use is a bit, overused, but good to start. Attempt to center everything and make the distance from the sides symmetrical. For the background image, I'd suggest either finding a higher res or going with a solid color. A typo "Benifits" >> "Benefits." Try to decrease the text size, a bit too large in my opinion, and then increase the distance between everything. It's like everything is crowded, but there's a lot of space to use.

Nice job though. 7/10 for first time.

Its my first time using Photoshop ever xd

Rip. Be sure you save in PNG as well. I saw on another post you didn't know how, so Google is your friend.
I'm really new at thread designs too, my application for Soleil is one of my first that I've tried on and is what I'm most proud of so far.

PNG is over-all better. Agree. Im watching tutorials on gfx shit :d

RE: First Ever Attempt at a Thread Design - Jebusfathead - 06-26-2016

Looks nice, but you could try to make that big diagonal thing not stand out so much, maybe lower its opacity

RE: First Ever Attempt at a Thread Design - Esoterith - 06-26-2016

(06-26-2016, 09:36 AM)Jebusfathead Wrote: Looks nice, but you could try to make that big diagonal thing not stand out so much, maybe lower its opacity

Check out my second fam

RE: First Ever Attempt at a Thread Design - Jebusfathead - 06-26-2016

(06-26-2016, 09:59 AM)Jay Wrote:
(06-26-2016, 09:36 AM)Jebusfathead Wrote: Looks nice, but you could try to make that big diagonal thing not stand out so much, maybe lower its opacity

Check out my second fam

Eh I prefer this one if it didn't have that overlay thing