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thread design - N--O--I - 02-02-2018

i hope you like my work .thanks
https://www.behance.net/gallery/61602321/thread-design

RE: thread design - chunky - 02-02-2018

It looks pretty clean and is nice to read. Well done.
The only thing I noticed is that the following stuff is not centered properly.

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RE: thread design - N--O--I - 02-02-2018

(02-02-2018, 05:49 PM)chunky Wrote: It looks pretty clean and is nice to read. Well done.
The only thing I noticed is that the following stuff is not centered properly.

[Image: YYQIZaX.png]

thanks a lot for feedback
i will check out it

RE: thread design - Synthx - 02-02-2018

That's really nice. I like it, you keep up the good work! I pretty much everything about it, it really does look good.

RE: thread design - chunky - 02-02-2018

I just noticed you forgot to add these dots to the left and right of this bar thingy.

[Image: pbQwwHh.png]
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RE: thread design - N--O--I - 02-02-2018

(02-02-2018, 07:19 PM)chunky Wrote: I just noticed you forgot to add these dots to the left and right of this bar thingy.

[Image: pbQwwHh.png]
[Image: FEk6awB.png]

thank you so much i will fix it Smile

RE: thread design - chunky - 02-02-2018

I'm sorry for posting so much improvements haha I definitly don't wanna be mean or something I just wanna help you, it already looks great x)

You should use a consistent style of writing so always put the punctuation mark right behind the last letter followed by a space like "Test. Test"
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Why is that one pink and at the beginning of a new line?
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I don't know if these things are supposed how they look like but I'd try to use the same height for every line.
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The buy button should go to that grey line so there is no white space above it and again, make sure all entries have the same height Wink
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RE: thread design - N--O--I - 02-02-2018

(02-02-2018, 08:01 PM)chunky Wrote: I'm sorry for posting so much improvements haha I definitly don't wanna be mean or something I just wanna help you, it already looks great x)

You should use a consistent style of writing so always put the punctuation mark right behind the last letter followed by a space like "Test. Test"
[Image: Pso7FFV.png]

Why is that one pink and at the beginning of a new line?
[Image: KKKovLh.png]

I don't know if these things are supposed how they look like but I'd try to use the same height for every line.
[Image: JjU1VeQ.png]

The buy button should go to that grey line so there is no white space above it and again, make sure all entries have the same height Wink
[Image: JkXNC62.png]

I really appreciate you so
i've have fixed it
please check out .

RE: thread design - chunky - 02-02-2018

Hmm yea looks better now. The major stuff seems to be fixed but the little things like the height of the product description lines are still in there.

RE: thread design - N--O--I - 02-02-2018

(02-02-2018, 08:45 PM)chunky Wrote: Hmm yea looks better now. The major stuff seems to be fixed but the little things like the height of the product description lines are still in there.

ok thanks a lot