[N--O--I]

i hope you like my work .thanks
https://www.behance.net/gallery/61602321/thread-design

[chunky]

It looks pretty clean and is nice to read. Well done.
The only thing I noticed is that the following stuff is not centered properly.

[N--O--I]

It looks pretty clean and is nice to read. Well done.
The only thing I noticed is that the following stuff is not centered properly.

thanks a lot for feedback
i will check out it

[Synthx]

That's really nice. I like it, you keep up the good work! I pretty much everything about it, it really does look good.

[chunky]

I just noticed you forgot to add these dots to the left and right of this bar thingy.

[N--O--I]

I just noticed you forgot to add these dots to the left and right of this bar thingy.

thank you so much i will fix it

[chunky]

I'm sorry for posting so much improvements haha I definitly don't wanna be mean or something I just wanna help you, it already looks great x)

You should use a consistent style of writing so always put the punctuation mark right behind the last letter followed by a space like "Test. Test"


Why is that one pink and at the beginning of a new line?


I don't know if these things are supposed how they look like but I'd try to use the same height for every line.


The buy button should go to that grey line so there is no white space above it and again, make sure all entries have the same height

[N--O--I]

I'm sorry for posting so much improvements haha I definitly don't wanna be mean or something I just wanna help you, it already looks great x)

You should use a consistent style of writing so always put the punctuation mark right behind the last letter followed by a space like "Test. Test"


Why is that one pink and at the beginning of a new line?


I don't know if these things are supposed how they look like but I'd try to use the same height for every line.


The buy button should go to that grey line so there is no white space above it and again, make sure all entries have the same height

I really appreciate you so
i've have fixed it
please check out .

[chunky]

Hmm yea looks better now. The major stuff seems to be fixed but the little things like the height of the product description lines are still in there.

[N--O--I]

Hmm yea looks better now. The major stuff seems to be fixed but the little things like the height of the product description lines are still in there.

ok thanks a lot