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Short Poem - Psycho_Coder - 05-26-2013
Hello [username],
I wrote this very short poem today. Don't expect it to be good; as a matter of fact its just that I wanted to write something today and so i wrote this and sharing this here regardless that it is a piece of junk. I am a programmer and not a poet or writer.
Code:
Title :- Moments
years passes by and the world rest's beside,
the world's passes by and the time stay's aside,
the time passes by and the hour's left behind,
the hours passes by and the moments stay in your mind.
Journey starts and time flee's,
pleasure come's when time relieve's,
moment spent are stored forever,
treasure them else they will come never.
Pleasure is when you experienced someone,
moments are when they are with you ever,
Pleasure moments when one's by your side,
feel the moments when they remain aside.
Time flees by and changes everything,
Moments grow but changes nothing,
Time makes your heart roll away,
Moments make your heart feel her more.
Everything come's in the blink of an eye,
Moments grow with them in your mind.
Time takes you back forever,
Moments returns your true-self to you for ever and ever.
Life seems to be complete with one by your side,
Life becomes hell when they are not with you,
Life feels best when you see them smile.
Life seems heavenly when you BECOME the reason for her smile.RE: Short Poem - MrGeek - 05-26-2013
Nice poem
You can write well.
How long does it take to complete?
Just curious.
RE: Short Poem - Psycho_Coder - 05-26-2013
(05-26-2013, 05:37 AM)MrGeek Wrote: Nice poemI think it took around 26 mins.
You can write well.
How long does it take to complete?
Just curious.
RE: Short Poem - MrGeek - 05-26-2013
(05-26-2013, 05:40 AM)Psycho_Coder Wrote:(05-26-2013, 05:37 AM)MrGeek Wrote: Nice poemI think it took around 26 mins.
You can write well.
How long does it take to complete?
Just curious.
ႈွSo , It did not take long.
I am not very good at poems.
But I write articles and short stories.
2 of them was on magazine
RE: Short Poem - Psycho_Coder - 05-26-2013
(05-26-2013, 05:43 AM)MrGeek Wrote:(05-26-2013, 05:40 AM)Psycho_Coder Wrote:(05-26-2013, 05:37 AM)MrGeek Wrote: Nice poemI think it took around 26 mins.
You can write well.
How long does it take to complete?
Just curious.
ႈွSo , It did not take long.
I am not very good at poems.
But I write articles and short stories.
2 of them was on magazine
Well I am mostly into poems rather than stories. I have written only one story. Poems fill me with a bit of sorrow and I love it
RE: Short Poem - TheDeceptionist - 05-26-2013
I just read the poem without reading the introduction.
Thought it was written by some experienced poet.
Then when I read the introduction:-
o.O , O.o , O.O .
You should actually go into poetry writing.
Seriously...
P.S Awesome.
RE: Short Poem - RogueCoder - 05-26-2013
That was pretty awesome. It was some of the first things I've read today, and yeah.. It gave be a good start on today bro
Well done