RE: Writers is already a mess... 02-20-2016, 08:47 PM
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Needn't to worry, it may lead to a rough start, but I'm certain it'll get better.
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(02-20-2016, 11:39 AM)Rikka Wrote: I don't take this as an insult or anything, no hate from my side, i'm just happy to get a feedback response.
First of all, i'm swedish so yes i have trouble with grammar & stuff like that 2nd thing of this topic is that i have dyslexia, so it's really hard for me to write, but i try my best & i try to develope myself as i go...
Second of all, it's my first time as a writer in general, i'm also looking for a co-leader who can help me with the issues i currently have.
But i see your point & if writers doesn't get a good look because of me, then sure, i'll resign...
Regards, Rikka.
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(02-20-2016, 11:51 PM)Forgotten Wrote: "Here at Writers our goal is deliver unique and professional news on a weekly basis. News that is written by the members, for the members. We'll be covering a wide range of topics such as: member interviews, headlines, world news(, and) forum news."
1. There's no such thing as "Our goal is deliver", it's either "Our goal is to deliver" or "Our goal is delivering"
2. News, you used an "s" in it because it's plural, so I'm pretty sure it wouldn't take an "is" but it'd actually take "are" unless you re-wrote it to be "SF Newspaper" or "_____ Newspaper"
3. It's not really a grammatical error, but I don't think the right word was "the", but it'd actually fit to be "other" or "the others" because eh, it's not really that "professional"
4. You don't put an "and" after a comma in similar situations because that's just silly.
That's professional, but yeah, everyone makes mistakes.
For the others, I agree on everything, it shouldn't really be led simply by <span class="toppostertoday">Rikka</span> just because s/he's Zenta's brother.
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(02-21-2016, 12:29 AM)Sirius Wrote: A new thread will be posted shortly regarding this. You will be given a chance and more time instead of picking.
Applications basically.
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