[TruePred]

Hey people these are 2 backgrounds i made to get into this clan called NG. They did accept me into the clan, but did not tell me what was good or how to improve on the backgrounds... so could u give me some feedback
All feedback is appreciated.

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[Falcon]

I like them. Although, it is a little hard to read the side text on the first one.


Overall: 8/10

[Evangelist]

7/10

[TruePred]

Thanks for the feedback Falcon & Evangelist

[Evangelist]

Its good man. Keep it up.

[Bane]

I have to post to see, so I will look and leave criticism.

Its nothing that screams wow, but still a good job none the less.

[TruePred]

Thanks People. Helps A Lot

[Index]

I wanna see this please. Helps a lot.

[Faith]

I'll have to go with the second one, looks very nice, 8/10.

The problem with the first one is that, it seems like 2 styles are being crammed together, and make it seem like it has a sloppy feel to your background, anyways, good effort man keep it up!