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Supreme Wallpaper Showcase #1
So I had a bit of time today and didn't know what else to do, so for fun, I decided to try and make a Supreme related Wallpaper.
It was really simple and honestly didn't spend too much time on it, definitely not my proudest piece of work..

Comes in two colors, white / grey-ish and blue. 
If you'd like it in another color, let me know and I'll change it. 

[Image: 62gU4mA.png]  [Image: DQaYPCx.png]

Open in a new tab for the full sized versions. 

What it looks like as an actual wallpaper: 

[Image: c6rBBi.png]

Feel free to give it a rating, come with criticism and what not.
(This post was last modified: 07-05-2016, 09:24 PM by Cumslut.)

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RE: Supreme Wallpaper Showcase #2
Ewww that metal background

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RE: Supreme Wallpaper Showcase #3
I'm not a fan of the second one, but the first one is noice

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RE: Supreme Wallpaper Showcase #4
the first one looks better than the second.

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RE: Supreme Wallpaper Showcase #5
I am not a fan of either to be honest. I'll give you a few reasons why though, just so this message isn't so barren and so that you can actually get some constructive feedback. (Totally not talking you guys that have replied earlier.) Unto the parts I do not like; 

The wings in the background, while they are fairly good pen-tool wise, they aren't really fitting with the name. "Supreme" refers to a being or object that is of the highest rank. If you had angel wings in your mind while making them, then cheers for the idea. Though the end result looks nothing like angels wings, they look like demon wings or imp wings. (Yes I know, we are all small devils in here, but still.) Aside from the vibe they're giving out then another complaint would be the random cut at the end in the middle. They don't "end" they just "stop" right away. No transition into an end or anything. Then you have the bad try at depth with the second set of wings, fading the ones behind isn't really depth. 

(It's a poor try at best.) Using shadows is depth, as you already have the light source. (Actually fading tends to look bad on wallpapers and logos.) This 'depth" also crashes with the reflection of the text, which is also badly done. There is no reflection of the wings, which makes no sense as there has to be a surface right under the main text, that he wings just clip through. (The highlight line at least makes it appear that it is.)  The logo text itself could need some depth work, so it doesn't look so flat. Add in some shadows and highlights to it, maybe some pattern over and across it? 

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RE: Supreme Wallpaper Showcase #6
(07-05-2016, 02:20 PM)Crow Wrote:
I am not a fan of either to be honest. I'll give you a few reasons why though, just so this message isn't so barren and so that you can actually get some constructive feedback. (Totally not talking you guys that have replied earlier.) Unto the parts I do not like; 

The wings in the background, while they are fairly good pen-tool wise, they aren't really fitting with the name. "Supreme" refers to a being or object that is of the highest rank. If you had angel wings in your mind while making them, then cheers for the idea. Though the end result looks nothing like angels wings, they look like demon wings or imp wings. (Yes I know, we are all small devils in here, but still.) Aside from the vibe they're giving out then another complaint would be the random cut at the end in the middle. They don't "end" they just "stop" right away. No transition into an end or anything. Then you have the bad try at depth with the second set of wings, fading the ones behind isn't really depth. 

(It's a poor try at best.) Using shadows is depth, as you already have the light source. (Actually fading tends to look bad on wallpapers and logos.) This 'depth" also crashes with the reflection of the text, which is also badly done. There is no reflection of the wings, which makes no sense as there has to be a surface right under the main text, that he wings just clip through. (The highlight line at least makes it appear that it is.)  The logo text itself could need some depth work, so it doesn't look so flat. Add in some shadows and highlights to it, maybe some pattern over and across it? 

Appreciate the feedback, thanks for taking your time to write so.
Perhaps next time I make something I'll try to think more deeply about it.
But again, was just a quick something I threw together with no real purpose or thought put into it.
Just a simple bored mix up of random things.

The wings, indeed, were supposed to somewhat represent angel wings, and the fact they don't reflect on the floor is because they were supposed to not really be attached to the text, more like... Idk, a shadow behind them? However I see it doesn't make sense given the light comes from above. But either way, it's not something I'll approve or adjust on this, was just more trying to test reflections / shadows / lights, as it's not something I've worked a lot with before. So next time I'll try to think about what you said. Thanks again.

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RE: Supreme Wallpaper Showcase #7
I like the whole idea and how well the wings are made with the pen tool, but Inton has already listed most of what I'll say so I'll just go ahead and say my constructive criticism.
The background isn't really fitting the logo/scene, perhaps you should either use a clean black background or try another background that fits. I also don't think the mirror/reflection effect fits the logo/scene at all, it looks like you have knowledge in using the software tools yet you lack "combining" them together.
I'd say too that duplicating the wings and doing a spin/rotation with nothing else makes it look bad in general at least from my view, that's all.
Other than that, I like the overall idea of the logo with wings and a spotlight on it.
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RE: Supreme Wallpaper Showcase #8
(07-03-2016, 09:08 PM)Cumslut Wrote: So I had a bit of time today and didn't know what else to do, so for fun, I decided to try and make a Supreme related Wallpaper.
It was really simple and honestly didn't spend too much time on it, definitely not my proudest piece of work..

Comes in two colors, white / grey-ish and blue. 
If you'd like it in another color, let me know and I'll change it. 

[Image: 62gU4mA.png]  [Image: DQaYPCx.png]

Open in a new tab for the full sized versions. 

What it looks like as an actual wallpaper: 

[Image: c6rBBi.png]

Feel free to give it a rating, come with criticism and what not.

To me they're nice haha. I like the logo the most.
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