[Blaze]

Hey hoh guys. As you may already know, am I learning gfx. I'm doing gfx for some months now, but i'm pretty new in c4d.
I just made a gfx for a good friend (Sparks).
Tell me what you think :3
(Feedback and tips how to make it better/become better are appreciated :b)

[lux]

It looks pretty awful in my opinion. You need to manage your lighting more, the "Sparks" Is way too bright compared to the background. Tone down the speckles over the text and blend everything more. 3/10 Imo.
Also, I assume English isn't your first language?..

[Care]

Agreed, The lighting is way off. I'd choose another font, and try to balance out the lighting between 'Sparks' and the BG.

[Blaze]

but i'm pretty new in c4d.

Make sure you read this

It looks pretty awful in my opinion

Before writing this.
And, are you judging about everyone's english skills? I'm sorry that i can't speak english perfectly with excellent grammar. My apologies.
Anyway, thanks for the feedback.

[lux]

Make sure you read this
Before writing this.
And, are you judging about everyone's english skills? I'm sorry that i can't speak english perfectly with excellent grammar. My apologies.
Anyway, thanks for the feedback.

I was just asking about your English, as in the rules it states

Your posts must also be legible, have decent grammar, and be in English.

[Blaze]

Well, imo it was decent grammar. You understood what i meant.
But your comment was kinda offensive imo. Sounds like you think I'm dumb.

Also, I assume English isn't your first language?..

Maybe you are better at gfx, maybe you have more experience. No reason to act like a dick.

[lux]

Well, imo it was decent grammar. You understood what i meant.
But your comment was kinda offensive imo. Sounds like you think I'm dumb.

Maybe you are better at gfx, maybe you have more experience. No reason to act like a dick.

If I came across as a dick I didn't mean too, I was just trying to give feedback on your piece of work.

[Eclipse]

Wow guys, chill out, he did say that he was pretty much a beginner. Saying his work is 'awful' is not really... you know what I mean. Yes I know everyone is entitled to an opinion.

And Blazey, I'm sure Lux did not mean to offend with his comment about grammar. I know him. He's not like that.

[Night Owl]

İ like the particles but you need to improve looking of this text maybe more effect or different font.