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Gfx for a friend - Blaze - 11-16-2013

Hey hoh guys. As you may already know, am I learning gfx. I'm doing gfx for some months now, but i'm pretty new in c4d.
I just made a gfx for a good friend (Sparks).
Tell me what you think :3
(Feedback and tips how to make it better/become better are appreciated :b)

[Image: 1mG8R02.png]

RE: Gfx for a friend - lux - 11-16-2013

It looks pretty awful in my opinion. You need to manage your lighting more, the "Sparks" Is way too bright compared to the background. Tone down the speckles over the text and blend everything more. 3/10 Imo.
Also, I assume English isn't your first language?..

RE: Gfx for a friend - Care - 11-16-2013

Agreed, The lighting is way off. I'd choose another font, and try to balance out the lighting between 'Sparks' and the BG.

RE: Gfx for a friend - Blaze - 11-16-2013

Blaze Wrote:but i'm pretty new in c4d.
Make sure you read this
Lux Wrote:It looks pretty awful in my opinion
Before writing this.
And, are you judging about everyone's english skills? I'm sorry that i can't speak english perfectly with excellent grammar. My apologies.
Anyway, thanks for the feedback.

RE: Gfx for a friend - lux - 11-16-2013

(11-16-2013, 06:36 PM)Blaze Wrote: Make sure you read this
Before writing this.
And, are you judging about everyone's english skills? I'm sorry that i can't speak english perfectly with excellent grammar. My apologies.
Anyway, thanks for the feedback.

I was just asking about your English, as in the rules it states
Sinisterly Rules Wrote:Your posts must also be legible, have decent grammar, and be in English.


RE: Gfx for a friend - Blaze - 11-16-2013

Well, imo it was decent grammar. You understood what i meant.
But your comment was kinda offensive imo. Sounds like you think I'm dumb.
Lux Wrote:Also, I assume English isn't your first language?..

Maybe you are better at gfx, maybe you have more experience. No reason to act like a dick.

RE: Gfx for a friend - lux - 11-16-2013

(11-16-2013, 07:39 PM)Blaze Wrote: Well, imo it was decent grammar. You understood what i meant.
But your comment was kinda offensive imo. Sounds like you think I'm dumb.

Maybe you are better at gfx, maybe you have more experience. No reason to act like a dick.

If I came across as a dick I didn't mean too, I was just trying to give feedback on your piece of work.

RE: Gfx for a friend - Eclipse - 11-17-2013

Wow guys, chill out, he did say that he was pretty much a beginner. Saying his work is 'awful' is not really... you know what I mean. Yes I know everyone is entitled to an opinion.

And Blazey, I'm sure Lux did not mean to offend with his comment about grammar. I know him. He's not like that.

RE: Gfx for a friend - Night Owl - 11-17-2013

İ like the particles but you need to improve looking of this text maybe more effect or different font.