[Mafia]

Hello today I want to get some feedback on a logo I am creating for a friend of mine. This is still being made so here is a brief overview of what I did.
1. Drawing:


2. Pentool
I pentooled round the shape to give it a "Smoothness"


3. Color
I added color but there are a few blending errors I will sort out later on.


Please rate out of 10 and give feedback.
Thanks
Mafia

[Kureo]

Looks nice, but you might wanna make the stroke around the head a little thinner.

[Mafia]

Looks nice, but you might wanna make the stroke around the head a little thinner.

Thanks, and is that on the final one or the drawing?

[Kureo]

Looks nice, but you might wanna make the stroke around the head a little thinner.

Thanks, and is that on the final one or the drawing?

The final one, the border around the entire thing looks a bit off because it so thick.

[Mafia]

Anymore feedback? I need some.

[Sapientia]

I like the last picture you posted, a lot.

[YellowKnife]

I think Number 2 is the best design, the others clash and make the writing harder to read.

[Nil]

I think the outline looks a little sloppy on a couple of the points on the mane.

[Sapientia]

It could be way better, but I definitely like the last one.

[Mafia]

It could be way better, but I definitely like the last one.

Thanks, I know. It is still in development.