[Frooxius]

Isn't it a bit short? No offense, but I think you should put more effort to this if you want it to make it serious, it's even shorter than the first one, you leave a lot of interesting things out. It shouldn't take more than 1-2 hours to gather interesting info, I myself can write 17000 character article in that time, including researching and other stuff (not just typing itself), though I do writing professionally (being paid for it).

Also small editorial suggestion: Put spaces after periods. You're missing whitespaces after periods in several places, it doesn't look good and it's against stylistics of writing.