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RE: Mariposa botnet brought down #18
(01-03-2014, 06:34 AM)madwad Wrote: botnets are so stupid and silly..this guy..well atleats yea sentence wasnt as ridiculous as others lol

Why are botnets 'stupid and silly'?

'botnets' - First letter capitalized as it is at the start of the sentence.
'silly..' - Remove one period and add a space after it.
'this guy..' - 'This' capitalized as it is also at the start of a sentence. Turn the two periods at the end of the sentence to an ellipsis. Like so: 'This guy...'.
'well atleats' - 'Well' capitalized as it is at the start of the sentence and 'atleats' is not a word. What you meant to say is 'at least'. You missed the 'h' plus, 'at least' is two separate words.
'yea' - I think you meant to say 'his'.
'wasnt' - Add an apostrophe before the 't'. 'Wasn't' is the merge of 'was' and 'not'. The apostrophe represents the letter/s that is missing.
'others lol' - Extend to maybe, '...others that were tried for similar offenses', and then add a period after the last word. Remember to capitalize 'lol' completely as it is an abbreviation. Also, add a period after. Like so: '...others. LOL.'

Quote:Botnets are so stupid and silly... This guy... Well at least his sentence wasn't as ridiculous as others that were tried for similar offenses. LOL

Although the overall structure is still weak, at least it follows basic grammar. Although I still have no idea what you mean by your first remark.

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Mariposa botnet brought down - by Eclipse - 12-29-2013, 11:47 AM
RE: Mariposa botnet brought down - by Dismas - 12-29-2013, 12:42 PM
RE: Mariposa botnet brought down - by Eclipse - 12-29-2013, 12:54 PM
RE: Mariposa botnet brought down - by lux - 12-29-2013, 01:27 PM
RE: Mariposa botnet brought down - by Eclipse - 12-29-2013, 01:30 PM
RE: Mariposa botnet brought down - by lux - 12-29-2013, 01:32 PM
RE: Mariposa botnet brought down - by Eclipse - 12-29-2013, 01:35 PM
Re: RE: Mariposa botnet brought down - by Dismas - 12-29-2013, 03:09 PM
RE: Mariposa botnet brought down - by Eclipse - 12-29-2013, 03:15 PM
RE: Mariposa botnet brought down - by lux - 12-29-2013, 03:25 PM
RE: Mariposa botnet brought down - by Eclipse - 12-29-2013, 03:27 PM
Re: RE: Mariposa botnet brought down - by Dismas - 12-29-2013, 04:14 PM
RE: Mariposa botnet brought down - by Eclipse - 12-29-2013, 04:53 PM
RE: Mariposa botnet brought down - by lux - 12-29-2013, 05:01 PM
RE: Mariposa botnet brought down - by Eclipse - 12-29-2013, 05:03 PM
RE: Mariposa botnet brought down - by Anizeb - 12-29-2013, 07:27 PM
RE: Mariposa botnet brought down - by madwad - 01-03-2014, 06:34 AM
RE: Mariposa botnet brought down - by Eclipse - 01-03-2014, 11:59 AM
RE: Mariposa botnet brought down - by madwad - 01-04-2014, 01:44 AM
RE: Mariposa botnet brought down - by Sined - 01-04-2014, 03:44 PM
RE: Mariposa botnet brought down - by Eclipse - 01-04-2014, 01:37 PM



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