RE: Ayoo~ New Signature and Avatar 07-29-2013, 11:38 PM
#10
I like it! It's a little monochromatic for my liking, because of your choice in color filters, but that really isn't that much of a drain in the overall appeal. Though it's nice to see you experimenting with the introduction of depth in this, it does feel a little forced with just how blurred the intentional background actually is. If you're feeling up to the challenge, I'd recommend lessening the level of blur you have on the background, and then slightly blurring any effects you would see as a "fore-foreground" - thus introducing 3 levels of depth into this piece (one for your background, one where the render resides, and another for the effects in the foreground). The composition is a little imbalanced with having all of your effects more towards the bottom of the canvas, so I would suggest bringing a couple up to the top to balance everything out. I've never been a large fan of typography in tags, and unfortunately, this really isn't an exception! The subtext of your title for this piece is a little too large, thus it competes for attention more than both the focal and initial text. I'd recommend either shrinking it down in size quite a bit, or even just completely removing it. Overall, you've done a fantastic job on this one.