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Thread Design #1
First thread design, I've ever even attempted to finish. Just never thought I'd make one. Never required one is one reason, I thought I'd give it a shot. I'm fairly experienced this is just something I just never got around to doing. So give me some feedback and suggestions on what I can do to improve this and future designs. Also note that I'm not 100% finished with this just yet, just a preview. I might even open up a shop, still haven't decided.

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RE: Thread Design #2
Looks really good! The only complaint I have is I can see that the circle and the box are 2 different shapes at the first graphic, I don't know if it was on purpose, I guess it just doesn't appeal to my sensibilities :/
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RE: Thread Design #3
This design is pretty awesome, I highly recommend making some money off doing designs for people, there's plenty of them out there that will buy.
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RE: Thread Design #4
Thank you both for the feedback.
Appreciate it!
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RE: Thread Design #5
Looks great man. I bet you will find some buyers online.

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Thread Design #6
Looks excellent. There are two things I'd like to mention, however - firstly I can see a few complications in making the code for this function well in multiple window sizes and such. Also, I'd like to point out the "lack" of clear navigation. I do not count the bottom navigation, since it has an info point, and two quite similar links. However, even if you switched those for more clear links, it would be, and is a great design.
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RE: Thread Design #7
(06-10-2014, 06:35 AM)Losimantom Wrote: Looks great man. I bet you will find some buyers online.

Thank you for the feedback, I might open up a shop if all goes well.

(06-10-2014, 07:36 AM)cr33pyguy Wrote: Looks excellent. There are two things I'd like to mention, however - firstly I can see a few complications in making the code for this function well in multiple window sizes and such. Also, I'd like to point out the "lack" of clear navigation. I do not count the bottom navigation, since it has an info point, and two quite similar links. However, even if you switched those for more clear links, it would be, and is a great design.

Appreciate the feedback, I'll keep that in mind.
(This post was last modified: 06-10-2014, 09:13 AM by Wage.)
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RE: Thread Design #8
It looks quite professional and organized. The only thing I would think odd would be how in the end you use the ampersands (&), which seems a bit out of place; you'd mostly use it in titles or products, so I think just replacing it with a comma and an "and" would make it flow better, like so:

Quote:We provide innovative designs that go into detail, and deliver a simplistic final result.

Something else I noticed in your "What to expect?": Rather than saying "on and off", I suggest just keeping it to "two years in total." And it's a bit repetitive when you say:

Quote:I originally started doing YouTube Backgrounds, when I first started and worked my way up to other projects.

You can just cut it down to:

Quote:I originally started doing YouTube Backgrounds, and since then worked my way up to other projects.
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RE: Thread Design #9
(06-10-2014, 09:20 AM)MiS Wrote: It looks quite professional and organized. The only thing I would think odd would be how in the end you use the ampersands (&), which seems a bit out of place; you'd mostly use it in titles or products, so I think just replacing it with a comma and an "and" would make it flow better, like so:


Something else I noticed in your "What to expect?": Rather than saying "on and off", I suggest just keeping it to "two years in total." And it's a bit repetitive when you say:


You can just cut it down to:
I'll update that right now, thank you very much.
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RE: Thread Design #10
(06-10-2014, 10:04 AM)Wage Wrote: I'll update that right now, thank you very much.

if you don't mind, would it be possible for me to get the .psd of the background on the header? :3
It's okay if you wanna keep it inclusive.

naturally, I would modify it slightly (probably change the background colour & make the lines more visible)
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