[Town]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=45Z1YXGcrrk - if you have any video's you would like to edit then just let me know and ill will gladly try to make it look the best i can

[Eternal Minds]

Add some effects.

Also, to make a smooth transition, you should add a fade at the beginning and the end, so it looks clean.

[Deviant]

I couldn't find a focus point because of the screen movements.
Also, it could look smoother.