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I need some feedback.. - Customer - 06-20-2013

This is it, and it sucks.. yes I know.

[Image: QioZcWz.png]

I suck at making smudge signatures, and I'm looking for ways to improve.

I couldn't find any decent brushes, so I made my own.

It's tiny because I started out with a tiny canvas, hoping it would help something.

Anyone got any tips for a beginner?

Also, tutorials would be awesome. I looked on the interwebs, and I found none really decent.

All/Any feedback is appreciated. Thank you.



RE: I need some feedback.. - Sirius - 06-20-2013

It looks nice but if you improve the text with better font and less smudging . Make it lighter too.


RE: I need some feedback.. - Customer - 06-20-2013

(06-20-2013, 12:14 PM)๖ۣۣۜۜHawk Wrote: It looks nice but if you improve the text with better font and less smudging . Make it lighter too.

Thanks pal, it really helps me out with some feedback.


RE: I need some feedback.. - Sirius - 06-20-2013

No problem, what software you use anyways?


RE: I need some feedback.. - ねこまっしぐら - 06-20-2013

Her arm looks broken. Make the picture a tad lower?


RE: I need some feedback.. - i0xIllusi0n - 06-20-2013

Make the text a little bolder so the drop shadow doesn't look like just a duplicate of the text, then it'd be perfect.


RE: I need some feedback.. - Loli - 06-20-2013

Improve:
Text
Flow
Lighting


RE: I need some feedback.. - Customer - 06-21-2013

(06-20-2013, 01:22 PM)๖ۣۣۜۜHawk Wrote: No problem, what software you use anyways?

Photoshop CS5.

(06-20-2013, 08:32 PM)Silica Wrote: Improve:
Text
Flow
Lighting

(06-20-2013, 07:02 PM)i0xIllusi0n Wrote: Make the text a little bolder so the drop shadow doesn't look like just a duplicate of the text, then it'd be perfect.

Will do guys, thanks. It helps me out a lot.


RE: I need some feedback.. - Loli - 06-21-2013

(06-21-2013, 01:30 AM)Customer Wrote: Photoshop CS5.



Will do guys, thanks. It helps me out a lot.

I do not in the least bit expect a beginner to make something like this but here is a good tutorial:
OH CLICK ME! Biggrin

You'll notice in the first image how everything follows the path of the render, in sort of an upward motion. That is the flow. So identify your flow, and go with it. Also, remember the rule of thirds, don't have your render in the middle of your tag, have it on one of the sides.


RE: I need some feedback.. - Customer - 06-21-2013

(06-21-2013, 01:49 AM)Silica Wrote: I do not in the least bit expect a beginner to make something like this but here is a good tutorial:
OH CLICK ME! Biggrin

You'll notice in the first image how everything follows the path of the render, in sort of an upward motion. That is the flow. So identify your flow, and go with it. Also, remember the rule of thirds, don't have your render in the middle of your tag, have it on one of the sides.

Thank you very much, Silica. It's a giant help. (: