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[Writing] Some edgy shit, I dunno - Kro - 06-06-2016
dying is the latest fad. The "light in the dark" from the torturous events upcoming this week is what everyone says. Do they not believe that I'll be able to accomplish it? I have come this far and achieved so much. I have my mom and dad who are proud of me and my girlfriend who looks forward to seeing me everyday. dying only will stop me from seeing her for a long while.
Maybe I'll do it; I'll get straight to dying. People usually seem to be at peace when they've died. At least that's what I've been told by my parents. They seem to be in full agreement with me dying even with the amazing accomplishments I've made. It'll give me that extra push I need. Cya guys, off to go get ready for dying!
- Stu(dying)
(If you didn't catch on already, I'm much disappoint)
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Another interesting but short concept I wanted to play with but not sure if I executed as well as I wanted to. I could probably have done a few more paragraphs with it. Opinions?
RE: [Writing] Some edgy shit, I dunno - Jebusfathead - 06-06-2016
This is another one of your sort of depressing pieces, but I think it's well stricter like how you said it would stop you seeing gf for a long while, but not forever, so you might meet in the afterlife (don't know if intentional but looks well structured with deeper meanings as well)
RE: [Writing] Some edgy shit, I dunno - Kro - 06-07-2016
(06-06-2016, 05:01 PM)Jebusfathead Wrote: This is another one of your sort of depressing pieces, but I think it's well stricter like how you said it would stop you seeing gf for a long while, but not forever, so you might meet in the afterlife (don't know if intentional but looks well structured with deeper meanings as well)
I was aiming for people to connect Stu and dying together to make Studying and Studied. =( That's the only deep meaning there is
RE: [Writing] Some edgy shit, I dunno - Jebusfathead - 06-07-2016
(06-07-2016, 12:09 PM)Kro Wrote:(06-06-2016, 05:01 PM)Jebusfathead Wrote: This is another one of your sort of depressing pieces, but I think it's well stricter like how you said it would stop you seeing gf for a long while, but not forever, so you might meet in the afterlife (don't know if intentional but looks well structured with deeper meanings as well)
I was aiming for people to connect Stu and dying together to make Studying and Studied. =( That's the only deep meaning there is
Oh shit that's even better, although without knowing that I wouldn't of got it.
RE: [Writing] Some edgy shit, I dunno - Kro - 06-07-2016
(06-07-2016, 02:08 PM)Jebusfathead Wrote:(06-07-2016, 12:09 PM)Kro Wrote:(06-06-2016, 05:01 PM)Jebusfathead Wrote: This is another one of your sort of depressing pieces, but I think it's well stricter like how you said it would stop you seeing gf for a long while, but not forever, so you might meet in the afterlife (don't know if intentional but looks well structured with deeper meanings as well)
I was aiming for people to connect Stu and dying together to make Studying and Studied. =( That's the only deep meaning there is
Oh shit that's even better, although without knowing that I wouldn't of got it.
The hint was italicizing the sign off and "dying"/"died"