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Retribution - pvnk - 05-04-2016 As I sat down, waves of murky brown water crashed against the barrier of time. With a godlike force, I expelled giant collections of half solid, half liquid admixture. Some particles stuck to the surface while other particles took form of an immaterial reincarnate of scent. The air reminded those it surrounded of a gruesome war. It reeked of rotting material. You can hear the screams of the city people who saw the overarching shadow that befell them. Doom was imminent. ...and that is the story of the explosive diarrhea I just had from eating a burger too quickly. Writing this thread took the edge off of the stomachache. Thanks guys. RE: Retribution - Oni - 05-04-2016 ...descriptive. RE: Retribution - Aeolian - 05-04-2016 Have you ever thought of becoming a writer? I like the detail. RE: Retribution - Skryptec - 05-04-2016 Best story, good job xD Explosive diarrhea? Well... I think I don't want to eat my chocolate anymore. RE: Retribution - Ice - 05-06-2016 Detailed... Very Detailed... But i liked it haha RE: Retribution - m0dem - 05-06-2016 wow. I was not expecting the last sentence.