Intensity by Nova (Perfume Ad)

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Intensity by Nova (Perfume Ad) - Master - 03-16-2016

This graphic design work is create for a imagery sale company called Nova, as part of my coursework, they sell a range of makeup and toiletries for both men and women. In preparation of the launch of the new perfume brand called Intensity, I have been hired to make a graphic design work.

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This form gives you the opportunity to give us the consolidated feedback on our design work.. Please give us feedback in as clear and detailed manner as possible. I will produce the next revision of design after receiving this form.

Post below your first impression of my design.

RE: Intensity by Nova (Perfume Ad) - Satan - 03-16-2016

You need shadows for your model, and she isn't aligned with the image properly.

RE: Intensity by Nova (Perfume Ad) - Aeolian - 03-16-2016

The Model needs some sort of shadowing as above said, aswell as the greyish floor looks really dull and fake.

Overall goodjob on this!

RE: Intensity by Nova (Perfume Ad) - Customer - 03-16-2016

The drop shadow on "By nova" needs to either be removed or lessen the opacity.

The floor is obviously fake. Can easily make it look real with rug or light colored pattern and/or tones.

Shadow on the model isn't there.

I'm not saying this just to point out everything wrong, I'm saying it to help. Honestly isn't that bad if you're a beginner.

RE: Intensity by Nova (Perfume Ad) - Oni - 03-17-2016

The model looks like an amputee.

RE: Intensity by Nova (Perfume Ad) - m0dem - 03-17-2016

(03-17-2016, 12:18 AM)Oni Wrote: The model looks like an amputee.

Now that you mention it... 0.0

RE: Intensity by Nova (Perfume Ad) - pvnk - 03-17-2016

There's something wrong about that text.

RE: Intensity by Nova (Perfume Ad) - Master - 03-17-2016

(03-17-2016, 12:18 AM)Oni Wrote: The model looks like an amputee.

I see what you mean, I thought I must of cut something out but it the same in the source file.

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RE: Intensity by Nova (Perfume Ad) - pvnk - 03-17-2016

(03-17-2016, 09:04 AM)Master Wrote: I see what you mean, I thought must of cut something out but it the same in the source file.

...lol gg her arms.

RE: Intensity by Nova (Perfume Ad) - Master - 03-22-2016

Made a web banner as well, what do you guys think?
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