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My Business Website - Justice_mybb_import8175 - 03-12-2014
I want your opinion on my website, I am using a template from ThemeForest The creator of this template is Mani, the template is $15 and he has a few to choose from. Is there anything you guys think I should add. It is close to being finished, some pictures and additional pages need to be completed (Taking my time). If you have any questions or feedback just PM me or send me an email.
Spoiler: Website Pictures
Additional info: Scripted in HTML/CSS/Jquery/JavaScript
RE: My Business Website - Ligeti - 03-12-2014
Hi
I don't like the about us page... http://kryptex.ca/#!aboutus
2 CEO and one programmer... this sounds bad!
And:
Quote:Justice Bowler
CEO/Programmer
Hi my name is Justice, I have been a
Quote:Aidan Martins
CEO/Programmer
Hi my name is Aidan, I have been a programmer
Quote:Sufien Tout
Programmer
Hi my name is Sufien, I have been a
Sorry mate, but this is a bad intro IMO, I mean... remove "Hi my name is... " part! (at least)
Another thing...
It's not good to have more than one CEO in a company, even if you do have a partner 50:50 you should consider having one CEO (or at least don't say CEO)!
The Interface is ...! I think it is narrow though, on fact I felt that I am watching a photo album or a slide-show more than if I was looking at a website!
I hope I didn't discourage you, or was too bitter with my judgments...
Good luck and peace!
RE: My Business Website - Justice_mybb_import8175 - 03-13-2014
@Ligeti That is perfect feedback, ill make some changes. I want the site to be appealing to the visitor, whether it be pictures text or video. Thank your for the input.
RE: My Business Website - invisal - 03-14-2014
@Ligeti is right. A company cannot have more than one CEO, but it can have more than one founder.
I think you should use third-person so instead of "I am Justice...", you can say
"Justice is a passionate programmer with 5 years experience in ...."
And you don't provide a clear message of what is your team about. Is it "Web Development" company?
Is it a "Desktop Application" company? Is it a software provider? ...
RE: My Business Website - Justice_mybb_import8175 - 03-14-2014
@invisal If you scroll down the about us page you will see a brief description of our company. I agree 100% with the feedback of @Ligeti, when I get some free time I will edit the page.
RE: My Business Website - invisal - 03-14-2014
(03-14-2014, 02:13 AM)xL3gi0n Wrote: @invisal If you scroll down the about us page you will see a brief description of our company. I agree 100% with the feedback of @Ligeti, when I get some free time I will edit the page.
That's the problem. First you put what is your company about in the "About
Us" page and put it far down (and the scroll bar is visible until either
you put your mouse near the right side edge of the browser or use mouse
wheel. People might not aware that there is more information down there.
And a short description of your company should in the front page because
front page is the most important part. They want to know who are you
when they visit your front page. Front page is a page which you
need to impress your potential customer. Once they interest, they
can dig into more detail about your team later.
RE: My Business Website - The Real Slim Shady - 03-14-2014
(03-14-2014, 02:13 AM)xL3gi0n Wrote: @invisal If you scroll down the about us page you will see a brief description of our company. I agree 100% with the feedback of @Ligeti, when I get some free time I will edit the page.
And while there you should consider sending all the text through a spell check. The text is riddled with obvious spelling and grammar errors.
RE: My Business Website - Justice_mybb_import8175 - 03-14-2014
@invisal Everything will be moved and finished, it was more of getting it uploaded and seeing what it looked like. I could have added a coming soon page but I got lazy.
RE: My Business Website - Justice_mybb_import8175 - 03-14-2014
(03-14-2014, 02:55 AM)Geoff Wrote:(03-14-2014, 02:13 AM)xL3gi0n Wrote: @invisal If you scroll down the about us page you will see a brief description of our company. I agree 100% with the feedback of @Ligeti, when I get some free time I will edit the page.
And while there you should consider sending all the text through a spell check. The text is riddled with obvious spelling and grammar errors.
It was a quick upload, I tried my best to word everything properly. Later I will fix all the grammar mistakes.