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1000 Year War [Poetry] - Kyou - 12-13-2013
My first poem.
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1000 Year War
Acceptance of darkness
The heart and soul of one man's son
The 1000 year struggle is over
The people have won
It starts again
Sacrifice of blood and tears
Eyes against nothing
Everyone's overwhelming fears
Battlefield covered in blood
Blinded by the night
Vanish forever
Into the infinite light
Eyes of the heavens watch over
Hand of the almighty sun
The old era is over
A new one has begun
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RE: 1000 Year War [Poetry] - Alex - 12-13-2013
Never been one for poems, if I was I would probably enjoy this.
RE: 1000 Year War [Poetry] - daimashin - 12-13-2013
Not bad for for a first one. Are you learning poetry?
RE: 1000 Year War [Poetry] - Kyou - 12-13-2013
(12-13-2013, 03:36 AM)daimashin Wrote: Not bad for for a first one. Are you learning poetry?
Yes, I have been. I enjoy writing quite a bit and pride myself on it. Though poetry is new to me and I've just experimented with things.
RE: 1000 Year War [Poetry] - daimashin - 12-13-2013
(12-13-2013, 03:37 AM)Dissociation Wrote:(12-13-2013, 03:36 AM)daimashin Wrote: Not bad for for a first one. Are you learning poetry?
Yes, I have been. I enjoy writing quite a bit and pride myself on it. Though poetry is new to me and I've just experimented with things.
Good to hear, not many people are interested in learning poetry anymore. These days it's becoming a dying art.
RE: 1000 Year War [Poetry] - Kaylah - 12-13-2013
I love poetry. I think it is a very good poem, even if it's a little sad. It has meaning to it. It is an intelligent poem. You should write more poetry. You seem to be good at it.
RE: 1000 Year War [Poetry] - Chieftain - 12-13-2013
I've never really liked reading poetry, but I actually enjoyed this. Nice poem.
RE: 1000 Year War [Poetry] - Suicide - 12-13-2013
I really liked your poem. It was very smooth.
RE: 1000 Year War [Poetry] - Google_HF - 12-15-2013
Nice Poem. I've enjoyed it.
RE: 1000 Year War [Poetry] - Muzzy - 12-18-2013
It's crazy that I remember reading this back in like june on DB.