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Not Exactly A Signature. - Black Haze - 10-30-2013
This is an edit I did. Tell me what you guys think.
![[Image: 9IlPRlg.png]](http://i.imgur.com/9IlPRlg.png)
RE: Not Exactly A Signature. - Fallen - 10-30-2013
The lock seems like you placed a sign on it and the Password is a font.
I would re-attempt it. 6/10.
I can't tell how much designing you actually did.
RE: Not Exactly A Signature. - DarkFlux™ - 10-30-2013
just good . 6/10 if you ask me :p
RE: Not Exactly A Signature. - Fallen - 10-30-2013
(10-30-2013, 05:49 PM)DarkFlux™ Wrote: just good . 6/10 if you ask me :p
No effort in your posts, clearly.
RE: Not Exactly A Signature. - 3SidedSquare - 10-30-2013
Most everything looks stretched (the monitor, the lock seems stretched to accommodate the bio hazard symbol)
The Blue/grey/white doesn't work well with the dark grey/black/red of the sinisterly theam
The different fonts you used between the username and password make both look out of place and awkward
The faint red glow in the left half the the sinisterly logo detracts from the logo looking like it was stamped out of the background
You did plenty of things right, and it's just a short way off from being really gorgeous, but I figure if you did them already, you know what you were doing right
6/10
RE: Not Exactly A Signature. - Black Haze - 10-30-2013
(10-30-2013, 05:46 PM)Fallen Wrote: The lock seems like you placed a sign on it and the Password is a font.
I would re-attempt it. 6/10.
I can't tell how much designing you actually did.
I used a different font for the password because the star symbol for that font, were guns instead of the default * symbol. Ergo, I had no choice but to change the font. As far as what was edited. I opened up the lock. It was closed. I added the Bio hazard sign to the lock. I completely revamped the background into a red/black Matrix background. I changed the login portion of the screen into pure black/grey. Using a gradient map. I used the Sinisterly logo and put a Belevel and Emboss effect to make it pop out more.
I added the text that said "Acer" and "Looks pretty fucking legit right". On the bottom. There's alot more but I won't go over every little thing.
(10-30-2013, 06:17 PM)3SidedSquare Wrote: Most everything looks stretched (the monitor, the lock seems stretched to accommodate the bio hazard symbol)*points to the above statement I just made* Also, I didn't make the monitor, and I didn't stretch the lock. I guess I see your point, but, I wanted that blue to look more like a login/password field. Maybe I should have just used white. Thanks for your CnC though!
The Blue/grey/white doesn't work well with the dark grey/black/red of the sinisterly theam
The different fonts you used between the username and password make both look out of place and awkward
The faint red glow in the left half the the sinisterly logo detracts from the logo looking like it was stamped out of the background
You did plenty of things right, and it's just a short way off from being really gorgeous, but I figure if you did them already, you know what you were doing right
6/10