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Jabbawockeez - Nam Duong - 07-03-2013
![[Image: jabbawockeez_smudge_by_myusernameisnam-d6bpu6g.png]](http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2013/183/1/c/jabbawockeez_smudge_by_myusernameisnam-d6bpu6g.png)
Made this for smudging practice. Any feedback?
RE: Jabbawockeez - Feat - 07-03-2013
I love this picture, but you might wanna add something that seems robotic, yet smooth considering thats how their moves are.
RE: Jabbawockeez - Ⅿonster - 07-03-2013
I agree with Feat on here. It's still good though.
RE: Jabbawockeez - Nam Duong - 07-03-2013
(07-03-2013, 01:21 AM)Feat Wrote: I love this picture, but you might wanna add something that seems robotic, yet smooth considering thats how their moves are.
Not sure what you mean. Please explain it
RE: Jabbawockeez - Soup_DZ - 07-04-2013
Someone's getting better (:.
You're making a great improvement.
I like this one better to be honest; http://diversebox.net/showthread.php?tid=1301
But that's mainly because this one is more monotonous and needs more color to it. The soft brushes also look kind of weird on the render. The random circles with clipping masks, I'm assuming, look kind of odd too. But nonetheless, it looks really nice (:
RE: Jabbawockeez - Nam Duong - 07-04-2013
(07-04-2013, 01:10 AM)Soup Wrote: Someone's getting better (:.
You're making a great improvement.
I like this one better to be honest; http://diversebox.net/showthread.php?tid=1301
But that's mainly because this one is more monotonous and needs more color to it. The soft brushes also look kind of weird on the render. The random circles with clipping masks, I'm assuming, look kind of odd too. But nonetheless, it looks really nice (:
Thanks Soup. I like the other one better too, but since this one was just a render and the other one was a stock, it was harder.I knew this one looked a bit monotone, but I didn't have any idea how to add colors to it. I'll try to make a more colorful piece next time. Thanks a lot for the feedback!
RE: Jabbawockeez - Ayden™ - 07-04-2013
That's pretty good man. I'll have to readup on more shit now.
- Ayden
RE: Jabbawockeez - Soup_DZ - 07-04-2013
(07-04-2013, 01:15 AM)Nam Duong Wrote:
What you can try is look for some colors that would look nice with the blue like some kind of green or whatever that matches the shade of blue and try to add it in to some of the smudge lines.