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1000 Year War [Poetry] - Kyou - 06-12-2013
So, this is my first poem, I have done some others, but this is the only one that I found on my computer.
Let me start off first by saying the theme beyond this poem is a war that was fought for 1000 years and finally lost, starting a new life in the end for future generations.
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1000 Year War
Acceptance of darkness
The heart and soul of one man's son
The 1000 year struggle is over
The people have won
It starts again
Sacrifice of blood and tears
Eyes against nothing
Everyone's overwhelming fears
Battlefield covered in blood
Blinded by the night
Vanish forever
Into the infinite light
Eyes of the heavens watch over
Hand of the almighty sun
The old era is over
A new one has begun
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What did you think?
RE: 1000 Year War [Poetry] - Tree_DZ - 06-12-2013
"It starts again
Sacrifice of blood and tears
Eyes against nothing
Everyone's overwhelming fears"
That's my favorite part. It's kind of scary imagining that "eyes against nothing, everyone's overwhelming fears" part. It's like going on a scary rollercoaster by yourself.
RE: 1000 Year War [Poetry] - Sunlight - 06-12-2013
Great poem. I read it about 8 times in like 2 minutes, very nice.
RE: 1000 Year War [Poetry] - Trill - 06-12-2013
Awesme , my fav was the
''Eyes of the heavens watch over
Hand of the almighty sun
The old era is over
A new one has begun''
So much feeling involved.
RE: 1000 Year War [Poetry] - Kyou - 06-13-2013
(06-12-2013, 04:12 AM)Trill Wrote: Awesme , my fav was the
''Eyes of the heavens watch over
Hand of the almighty sun
The old era is over
A new one has begun''
So much feeling involved.
Yeah, that was my favorite part when I was writing it actually. Feels strong.
RE: 1000 Year War [Poetry] - Rain_DZ - 06-13-2013
Woah, the new Shakespeare is born! Beautiful, just beautiful!
RE: 1000 Year War [Poetry] - Wonders - 06-13-2013
That was very impressive, nicely done Chris.
RE: 1000 Year War [Poetry] - Storm_DZ - 06-13-2013
Great poem man, thanks for the share.
RE: 1000 Year War [Poetry] - Cosmic - 06-13-2013
It's nice, but there is no deeper meaning. I can read it and move on without it inspiring any thought.
RE: 1000 Year War [Poetry] - OversouL - 06-13-2013
Nice poem, I didn't know that you like to right poems. :happy:
keep it up ^_^