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RE: Writers is already a mess... - Shu - 02-20-2016
Needn't to worry, it may lead to a rough start, but I'm certain it'll get better.
RE: Writers is already a mess... - Pikami - 02-20-2016
Nice thread, you should become a writer your self @180 !
I like the way you think and I agree with you at some points and I hope the @98 will fix his mistakes because writers are a wery important peace of a forum because they bring news to the users.
RE: Writers is already a mess... - Esoterith - 02-20-2016
(02-20-2016, 11:39 AM)Rikka Wrote: I don't take this as an insult or anything, no hate from my side, i'm just happy to get a feedback response.
First of all, i'm swedish so yes i have trouble with grammar & stuff like that 2nd thing of this topic is that i have dyslexia, so it's really hard for me to write, but i try my best & i try to develope myself as i go...
Second of all, it's my first time as a writer in general, i'm also looking for a co-leader who can help me with the issues i currently have.
But i see your point & if writers doesn't get a good look because of me, then sure, i'll resign...
Regards, Rikka.
If you ever need someone to proof read something just pm me. I'll do it and help fix any errors immediately. No need for a co, This early on.
RE: Writers is already a mess... - Krados - 02-20-2016
"Here at Writers our goal is deliver unique and professional news on a weekly basis. News that is written by the members, for the members. We'll be covering a wide range of topics such as: member interviews, headlines, world news(, and) forum news."
1. There's no such thing as "Our goal is deliver", it's either "Our goal is to deliver" or "Our goal is delivering"
2. News, you used an "s" in it because it's plural, so I'm pretty sure it wouldn't take an "is" but it'd actually take "are" unless you re-wrote it to be "SF Newspaper" or "_____ Newspaper"
3. It's not really a grammatical error, but I don't think the right word was "the", but it'd actually fit to be "other" or "the others" because eh, it's not really that "professional"
4. You don't put an "and" after a comma in similar situations because that's just silly.
That's professional, but yeah, everyone makes mistakes.
For the others, I agree on everything, it shouldn't really be led simply by Rikka just because s/he's Zenta's brother. This isn't meant to insult you, and I hope it doesn't, but it needs a more professional leader regards of what is his main language/the diseases s/he has.
RE: Writers is already a mess... - snow - 02-20-2016
(02-20-2016, 11:51 PM)Forgotten Wrote: "Here at Writers our goal is deliver unique and professional news on a weekly basis. News that is written by the members, for the members. We'll be covering a wide range of topics such as: member interviews, headlines, world news(, and) forum news."
1. There's no such thing as "Our goal is deliver", it's either "Our goal is to deliver" or "Our goal is delivering"
2. News, you used an "s" in it because it's plural, so I'm pretty sure it wouldn't take an "is" but it'd actually take "are" unless you re-wrote it to be "SF Newspaper" or "_____ Newspaper"
3. It's not really a grammatical error, but I don't think the right word was "the", but it'd actually fit to be "other" or "the others" because eh, it's not really that "professional"
4. You don't put an "and" after a comma in similar situations because that's just silly.
That's professional, but yeah, everyone makes mistakes.
For the others, I agree on everything, it shouldn't really be led simply by <span class="toppostertoday">Rikka</span> just because s/he's Zenta's brother.
I'm glad someone realized there were errors made. Although some were intentional, others were more likely made because it was 7AM when I wrote it. I kept errors because if Rikka were to just take what I wrote, I'd have grounds for a counter argument along the lines of you should write these in your own words, and here is why. In which I'd highlight the errors made. Hope that makes sense. It did to 7AM me at least, I do appreciate someone reading and realizing there are errors.
RE: Writers is already a mess... - Alpha_mybb_import13563 - 02-21-2016
The thing is, nothing has been done to change the recruitment stuffs
RE: Writers is already a mess... - Sirius - 02-21-2016
A new thread will be posted shortly regarding this. You will be given a chance and more time instead of picking.
Applications basically.
RE: Writers is already a mess... - snow - 02-21-2016
(02-21-2016, 12:29 AM)Sirius Wrote: A new thread will be posted shortly regarding this. You will be given a chance and more time instead of picking.
Applications basically.
Glad to hear.
RE: Writers is already a mess... - Zenta - 02-21-2016
@180 Thank you for this suggestion. I've posted a thread in the announcements. I recommend all users take a look at snow's thread.