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RE: Charlotte Dunois - OfficerMods - 01-17-2014
Well it's amateur work, gotta start somewhere right? The closed right eye/eyebrow is off, makes her looks like she is in pain or something. The hands, arms and sholders look like noodles and are left to right different sizes. The mouth is to large and too round, angle of the upper lip helps to make her look like she is in pain, and her teeth makes her look like a squirrel. Also the bunny girl suit, the part holding up her cleavage is drawn at a weird angle, like its a size too big, and her left breast just looks like a lopsided water balloon rather than a part of human anatomy. Mediocre and a copy at that, not trying to put you down but it's clear that you are a budding artist and need alot more practice.
RE: Charlotte Dunois - Equinox - 01-17-2014
(01-17-2014, 04:34 AM)OfficerMods Wrote: Well it's amateur work
I've been drawing all of my life. Wouldn't consider it "amateur". However I will say that the drawing itself has many flaws.
RE: Charlotte Dunois - OfficerMods - 01-17-2014
(01-17-2014, 04:42 AM)Duubz Wrote: I've been drawing all of my life. Wouldn't consider it "amateur". However I will say that the drawing itself has many flaws.
If that's the case why not draw an original of charlotte?
RE: Charlotte Dunois - Equinox - 01-17-2014
(01-17-2014, 06:54 AM)OfficerMods Wrote: If that's the case why not draw an original of charlotte?
I don't really know. Haven't tried. Well, not an original that is.