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RE: Weird Manip - Cl0ud - 11-16-2013
Fuck you all, this is perfect.
You got some perfect talent goo.
RE: Weird Manip - botÃn - 11-16-2013
(11-14-2013, 11:06 PM)Daniel Wrote:(11-14-2013, 11:03 PM)goo Wrote:(11-14-2013, 11:00 PM)Daniel Wrote: That spaceman doesn't fit much where he is right now. I would add him some shadows so it's more realistic.
There are shadows, but it's so dark that you don't see much.
You should create a game: 'Find the shadows!' :crazy: I really can't find them, it's too dark already as you said. Maybe some lights coming from the sky help.
![[Image: 5isH3.jpg]](http://puu.sh/5isH3.jpg)
There's one right there, there aren't any more as the source of light is clearly this and you don't add random shadows, you add them corresponding to the light source.
![[Image: 5jYf6.jpg]](http://puu.sh/5jYf6.jpg)
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Updated version.
![[Image: 5jYWY.png]](http://puu.sh/5jYWY.png)
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(11-16-2013, 03:02 PM)Cl0ud Wrote: Fuck you all, this is perfect.
You got some perfect talent goo.
At least someone appreciates my work :wave:
RE: Weird Manip - Ash - 11-16-2013
I like the update more, just one thing lower the opacity on the stars on the left of the spaceman or not have to many there. Other that that this is perfect 8/10.
RE: Weird Manip - KaareK - 11-18-2013
1. The lightning on the spaceman is bad, you should really do something about it.
And the spaceman seems a little big, in consideration of the road.
2. Also make the road blend better, in the lower right area.
3. What's this?
![[Image: 5lXEM.png]](http://puu.sh/5lXEM.png)
(upper right area, of the sky)I think it looks good, but there's space for improvement. I suggest keep working on it, as it has potential, but you need to improve some of this
mile:EDIT: Oh you made an updated version, sorry.
Lower the opacity of the colour you've smashed onto it.
The spaceman still needs better lightning, the road still needs to blend better.
I like the updated version better, but keep working on it!