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RE: What is wroth fighitng for? - School Essay - - w00t - 11-24-2013
It's evident you didn't plan out which ideas go where. You jump from idea to idea without any effective transition. You can write informally and still seem credible, but you cannot write w/o planning which ideas go where and seem credible.