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Assassin - Branno - 02-11-2013
This is my first ever tag I have made.
I did not follow any tutorial and I am quite proud of myself!
Yeah it could be better, but it's my first one and I'm happy with it!
![[Image: waNkOwH.png]](http://i.imgur.com/waNkOwH.png)
RE: Assassin - ✧Sirius Paradox✧ - 02-11-2013
It's not bad at all for your own piece. Personally, I'd do a little more smudging as the background is very plane and empty. Also, search up "The Rule of Thirds" for your text alignment, it's placed horribly and should be placed nearer the focal piece.
Not bad, though.
RE: Assassin - Alex - 02-11-2013
The text is horrible, you should just remove it. The background needs work, its really empty and boring. Its ok
, you should battle me and fusion.
RE: Assassin - Valentino - 02-12-2013
Not bad for a first!
The background could use a bit more work, you could maybe try duplicating your render and smudging it for the background. I wouldn't use the ripple on your foreground render though, it looks a bit odd and probably better suited to just the background. I also agree about the text, it needs to be moved to the center because right now it's disrupting the flow of the sig. A cleaner font would look nice too!
RE: Assassin - guy894 - 02-12-2013
I think that tag looks very well done. I give you a lot of credit for being so thoughtful about the overall design.
RE: Assassin - נιχ fяαи¢нιѕє - 02-12-2013
(02-11-2013, 12:48 PM)Virtuosity Wrote:
the text defiantly needs work, when doing text you gotta make the font kinda match with the theme of your tag or your render maybe something like a medieval font or just a regular light font. don't put multiple text in different areas of the tag put it in one place so people don't get distracted and lose focus from the focal.
you could of done a lot with this render doing a bit of smudge is a great idea mix that with some Fractals and it will look great but not to much you wouldn't want this to be flooded with effects.
the color correction in this tag is not very appealing imo you might of been going for a dark feel to it witch you might think is easy to achieve but its really not take more time on the color correction (More time Better Results)
RE: Assassin - Versace - 02-14-2013
Like everyone else said the text ruined it. Other then that you did a great job.
RE: Assassin - Rhys - 02-15-2013
Very cool, I like the line in the middle which changes the tones. I personally really like it and I think it looks pretty awesome. I just don't really like the text tbh.
RE: Assassin - nehal7rao - 02-15-2013
I don't think the text matches the the signature might want to look into that.
RE: Assassin - Alex - 02-16-2013
(02-16-2013, 03:18 PM)Trixie Wrote: The text doesn't really suit the assassin. Did you draw the assassin or did you find it on Google?
I'm pretty sure its a render but I could be wrong ;(