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Rate my Instrumental - Adorapuff - 09-08-2014
I'm working on a tribute to FFHE
https://soundcloud.com/adorapuff/wip
There will be words over it soon
Please rate x/10 and what I could do to improve
This is my first time working with garageband, so I'm like a kid in a candyshop with all these cool features.
RE: Rate my Instrumental - ProfessorChill - 09-08-2014
5/10 Starting was amazing but then you kinda dragged off into a different rhythm entirely, not only at the starting but through multiple parts of the song. Try to stick with one beat/rhythm, other than that it sounded pretty great!
RE: Rate my Instrumental - Cressi - 09-08-2014
(09-08-2014, 02:11 AM)Adorapuff Wrote: I'm like a kid in a candyshop with all these cool features.
There are loads, aren't there? ^^
I'd rate it 6/10, as it's rather well composed, but you could've worked a bit more on the levels and using less features ^^
RE: Rate my Instrumental - egrus - 09-08-2014
7/10 kinda has that 80's sound mixed with a german techno
RE: Rate my Instrumental - 3SidedSquare - 09-08-2014
(09-08-2014, 09:08 AM)ProfessorChill Wrote: Started amazing but then you kinda dragged off into a different rhythm entirely, not only at the starting but through multiple parts of the song. Try to stick with one beat/rhythm, other than that it sounded pretty great!6/10, basically this. The pianio might have been nice on its own, same with the electronic, but don't give up on one entirely halfway though the song.
RE: Rate my Instrumental - Illuminaughty - 09-08-2014
Kinda sounds like 4 instrumentals put into 1. 5/10
RE: Rate my Instrumental - Adorapuff - 09-08-2014
I'm getting rid of the piano and doing all electric.
RE: Rate my Instrumental - ProfessorChill - 09-09-2014
(09-08-2014, 09:08 PM)Adorapuff Wrote: I'm getting rid of the piano and doing all electric.
Make sure not to only use presets, try out Z3ta+ by cakewalk, it's quite the software for dance synths [additive synths]
Or try NI Massive for subtractive synths [not sure what it's for yet.]
RE: Rate my Instrumental - Nyx - 09-09-2014
5/10 like Prof.Chill. You started very strong but it got too deep and heavy for me.
RE: Rate my Instrumental - Adorapuff - 09-09-2014
(09-09-2014, 03:32 AM)ProfessorChill Wrote: Make sure not to only use presets, try out Z3ta+ by cakewalk, it's quite the software for dance synths [additive synths]
Or try NI Massive for subtractive synths [not sure what it's for yet.]
I just installed Z3ta+ trial. Thanks