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Tank Top Design - Mafia - 01-08-2014
Hey so I am thinking about getting my own Tank Top printed and made this:
![[Image: LhJarH0.png]](http://i.imgur.com/LhJarH0.png)
I had no idea what to put for the text and need some help with it.
Also please rate out of 10
Thanks
Mafia :blackhat:
RE: Tank Top Design - latex_op - 01-08-2014
Looks nice man. I like the text 'I am free'. Maybe make it a little bit bigger?
RE: Tank Top Design - Mafia - 01-08-2014
(01-08-2014, 05:14 PM)latex_op Wrote: Looks nice man. I like the text 'I am free'. Maybe make it a little bit bigger?
Hmmm I don't think it goes with the picture though...
RE: Tank Top Design - BeastlyHobos - 01-08-2014
This looks pretty sick, how are you getting it printed? Over the web or through a local print store?
RE: Tank Top Design - Nefarious - 01-08-2014
It looks okay, but the edges of the logo make it look strange.
If it were me I would try expanding it some, or getting a darker tank.
7/10
RE: Tank Top Design - Wonder - 01-08-2014
8/10 for me
Maybe find a way to blend the text in a bit more and try to get a fade on the sides instead of it looking so boxy. Just my thoughts, great concept so far.
RE: Tank Top Design - Kureo - 01-09-2014
That's rather nice, however I think you may want to take a look at the left/right edges. They ruin the flow a little as they are so sharply cut off.
RE: Tank Top Design - Mafia - 01-11-2014
(01-09-2014, 05:55 PM)Destiny Wrote: That's rather nice, however I think you may want to take a look at the left/right edges. They ruin the flow a little as they are so sharply cut off.
So smooth it out? Or make it jagged like the top?
RE: Tank Top Design - Kureo - 01-11-2014
(01-11-2014, 12:08 PM)Mafia Wrote: So smooth it out? Or make it jagged like the top?
Jagged or perhaps making it go all the way around the tank top. ( Smooth may also work, try to experiment a little. )
RE: Tank Top Design - Cyan - 01-12-2014
Can I get that mock up for that man? and sick design
