**Is posted elsewhere**
I created this signature, after posting I have been told that it isn't Ezio, my fault for not researching and the huge space on the side is kind of an off put. I am looking for criticism, good or bad to improve!
![[Image: cXSDCwF.png]](http://i.imgur.com/cXSDCwF.png)
I must ask how long it took you to make, because there is ALOT of blank space.
It's a nice tag overall.
If I am not mistaken that is Conner. Also, do you think you could make me a signature using a image?
Also, I think it is far too empty.
The light on the side with the light is good, I think that it is to dark on the left side. And there is too much open space but other than that keep up the good work
The left arm should of had a bit of smudging.
As for the open space, it isn't bad actually.
The quality of the render makes the open space look good with the sig.
(12-22-2013, 01:58 AM)Slyestcat Wrote: [ -> ]The render looks like it hasn't been properly blended on the left side. Also like you said there is alot of empty space, which can be appealing, if done right. Try to move the render around and mess with some stocks. Also the text is very unappealing to me, so I'd remove it or change it up.
That's a good point about the left side. Thanks!
(12-22-2013, 01:59 AM)Deviant Wrote: [ -> ]I must ask how long it took you to make, because there is ALOT of blank space.
It's a nice tag overall.
Smudging honestly took like 20 minutes >.> was trying to make it look good, changing around the colours mid tones, highlights and shades would have only taken about 5.
(12-22-2013, 02:00 AM)ABC Wrote: [ -> ]If I am not mistaken that is Conner. Also, do you think you could make me a signature using a image?
Also, I think it is far too empty.
I could give it a go, just PM me if you want!
(12-22-2013, 02:05 AM)BeastlyHobos Wrote: [ -> ]The light on the side with the light is good, I think that it is to dark on the left side. And there is too much open space but other than that keep up the good work
Thanks!
(12-22-2013, 02:09 AM)Trey Wrote: [ -> ]The left arm should of had a bit of smudging.
As for the open space, it isn't bad actually.
The quality of the render makes the open space look good with the sig.
That's a good point, the left arm would probably look better smudged.
(12-22-2013, 02:42 AM)Saikou Wrote: [ -> ]That's Edward Kenway, from Assassin's Creed IV, not Connor or Ezio.
http://assassinscreed.wikia.com/wiki/Edward_Kenway
Correct, I got told this yesterday! :blackhat:
Need to make the flow more smooth and your text is a bit out of proportion with the rest of the composition.