Thoughts on this piece? 07-28-2013, 12:18 AM
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![[Image: sfl11z.jpg]](http://i41.tinypic.com/sfl11z.jpg)
Pretty amazing work IMO....
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(07-28-2013, 01:37 AM)Blue Wrote: It looks really nice, What do you mean Naruto Base doe. BTW, You can get Second life and join a naruto rp village. I never got into it was pretty fun looking around one though!Like a forum Naruto Base. Also is that RP game one where you can walk around or is it website based?
http://www.shinobilegends.com/home.php?
Also here I played this for a while crazy fun!
Edit:
This is another by the same people. Never played it though. Might check it out later!
http://second.shinobiwar.com/
(07-28-2013, 01:40 AM)Minato Wrote:(07-28-2013, 01:37 AM)Blue Wrote: It looks really nice, What do you mean Naruto Base doe. BTW, You can get Second life and join a naruto rp village. I never got into it was pretty fun looking around one though!Like a forum Naruto Base. Also is that RP game one where you can walk around or is it website based?
http://www.shinobilegends.com/home.php?
Also here I played this for a while crazy fun!
Edit:
This is another by the same people. Never played it though. Might check it out later!
http://second.shinobiwar.com/
(07-28-2013, 05:48 AM)Blue Wrote:(07-28-2013, 01:40 AM)Minato Wrote:(07-28-2013, 01:37 AM)Blue Wrote: It looks really nice, What do you mean Naruto Base doe. BTW, You can get Second life and join a naruto rp village. I never got into it was pretty fun looking around one though!Like a forum Naruto Base. Also is that RP game one where you can walk around or is it website based?
http://www.shinobilegends.com/home.php?
Also here I played this for a while crazy fun!
Edit:
This is another by the same people. Never played it though. Might check it out later!
http://second.shinobiwar.com/
Its a RP Game I am pretty sure. Its website based. Read on there site.
(07-29-2013, 11:34 PM)Calm Wrote: I have to admit, I spent quite a bit looking at the effects you have hanging off of each piece, just to find a repeat in pattern, and was pleasantly surprised that there was very few! I'm not entirely sure what the context or purpose for this piece is, so I can't really comment on the effectiveness of it, but I can certainly provide a critique on the overall appearance of it. First off, I love the color clash you're using to separate the canvas. Though the colors themselves are a little bit boring, you did a fantastic job picking ones that are complimentary to each other. Effects wise, the overall cleanliness of the work is pleasant to look at. You didn't absolutely abuse effects, and that really contributes to the overall aesthetic appeal. The one thing I would recommend changing up on is the filter you've used for the planet beneath the banner. I can't remember the name of the exact filter (it's some sort of wrap or brush... I think), but it doesn't match very well with the rest of the canvas. The blurriness you've added to it is good, so it doesn't take away from the intended focal, but the filter in itself is quite unappealing.
(07-29-2013, 11:46 PM)Calm Wrote:(07-29-2013, 11:44 PM)Eternity Wrote: HQ post but, keep the paragraphs a little smaller please.
Makes it easier to read.
I suppose I always could use a smaller font. :angel:
(07-29-2013, 11:52 PM)Eternity Wrote:(07-29-2013, 11:46 PM)Calm Wrote:(07-29-2013, 11:44 PM)Eternity Wrote: HQ post but, keep the paragraphs a little smaller please.
Makes it easier to read.
I suppose I always could use a smaller font. :angel:
What i mean, use more smaller paragraphs with spacing.