[MesaGFX]

Tried to make it simple and clean

[Jiggly]

It's pretty nice overall. Although, the people look too 'in-focus' for the rest of the image. I would add a small overlay to add a little fuzz and a hint more of that orangey glow from the rest of the image to make it look more natural.

Better than I could do for sure!

[Skullmeat]

Yeah, they look far too sharp. His colors are off as well, he should be slightly orange because of the sun. Try adding some lens or Gaussian blur and change the peoples color balance to match the scene.

[mothered]

Yeah, they look far too sharp.

You've nailed It right here . I was trying to Identify exactly what was wrong, and then read this comment.

It does need Improvements here and there, but generally speaking, a job well done.