[PapaJoy]

Not a finished product. Just to get warmed up. Took me 15 mins to sketch. Will I complete it? Probs not. Why? I need more practice : P



Drawn in photoshop. Still need to work on the anatomy and perspective. rip.

[Kro]

What will this be turned into? The slouched back and hands forward hints at he's going to be holding and focusing on something. It is far too incomplete to actually rate. Your facial structure needs to be fixed unless you plan on turning the whole body into a jagged cartoon.

[PapaJoy]

It's not meant to be a completed piece. Its just practice to get warmed up. As for what I wanted, a guy sitting down with strong facial features holding something(never really decided what).

"Still need to work on the anatomy and perspective. rip."

In terms of style I wanted to give off a mix of manga/comic style. But the aim wasn't too much of style as it was anatomy.

[Kro]

It's not meant to be a completed piece. Its just practice to get warmed up. As for what I wanted, a guy sitting down with strong facial features holding something(never really decided what).

"Still need to work on the anatomy and perspective. rip."

In terms of style I wanted to give off a mix of manga/comic style. But the aim wasn't too much of style as it was anatomy.

If this is all you plan to do for this drawing, it still looks piss poor because it's nothing that can be rated. If we're rating your anatomy, you have two different styles in one which is quite hard to rate. You have a squared out chin and then round out the rest of the body. You also left your sketch-lines so it's even harder to rate. I can't make a score or opinion on this because to me, I could do this



and say it was meant to be a building beside a street... but it's incomplete. What's the building? What's the shadow? Hopefully I explained myself a tiny bit.

[PapaJoy]

What will this be turned into? The slouched back and hands forward hints at he's going to be holding and focusing on something. It is far too incomplete to actually rate. Your facial structure needs to be fixed unless you plan on turning the whole body into a jagged cartoon.

It's not meant to be a completed piece. Its just practice to get warmed up. As for what I wanted, a guy sitting down with strong facial features holding something(never really decided what).

"Still need to work on the anatomy and perspective. rip."

In terms of style I wanted to give off a mix of manga/comic style. But the aim wasn't too much of style as it was anatomy.

If this is all you plan to do for this drawing, it still looks piss poor because it's nothing that can be rated. If we're rating your anatomy, you have two different styles in one which is quite hard to rate. You have a squared out chin and then round out the rest of the body. You also left your sketch-lines so it's even harder to rate. I can't make a score or opinion on this because to me, I could do this
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and say it was meant to be a building beside a street... but it's incomplete. What's the building? What's the shadow? Hopefully I explained myself a tiny bit.

I definitely understand what you are saying. But there are still points were you can comment on such as anatomy, proportions and perspective. The point of the sketch was to get me working with the body so can improve.