RE: Made This Teaser Video!!! 07-22-2016, 02:17 AM
#6
There's a few places you could improve here:
- May 26th 2015 feels too drawn out
- None of the animation is really moving to the music, you don't have to do something every beat, but try to sync some things up to make it more immersive
- Andy Granner's name is hard as fuck to read, I'd suggest doing something about the font, I think outlines for the inside of the capital R, N, and A would suffice, as N's just look like rectangles
- During Cobra Starship, the circle distortion goes right in the middle of many people's heads, the main focus point of that frame, it feels off-putting and I don't know what I'm supposed to look at
- Flo Rida's name is hard to read against the sun, either outline the font or change the BG
- Overall there's just not enough to immerse someone, the text isn't doing anything, the logo's aren't doing anything, aside from the distortion effects on some of the reveals, it's just bland with not enough going on
- May 26th 2015 feels too drawn out
- None of the animation is really moving to the music, you don't have to do something every beat, but try to sync some things up to make it more immersive
- Andy Granner's name is hard as fuck to read, I'd suggest doing something about the font, I think outlines for the inside of the capital R, N, and A would suffice, as N's just look like rectangles
- During Cobra Starship, the circle distortion goes right in the middle of many people's heads, the main focus point of that frame, it feels off-putting and I don't know what I'm supposed to look at
- Flo Rida's name is hard to read against the sun, either outline the font or change the BG
- Overall there's just not enough to immerse someone, the text isn't doing anything, the logo's aren't doing anything, aside from the distortion effects on some of the reveals, it's just bland with not enough going on


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