[0M4R]

So if you seen one of my last posts you would know that I made a logo for someones IT coursework as they were falling behind, similarly for the same person i made this teaser video for their 'Music Festival' coursework (way better than the one i made for myself.. meh). Hope you guys like it and also hope to get some feedback/constructive criticism from you guys so i can improve.

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P.S. Just so you know, i made this a long while back when i was in school. School is finished now but thought i'd share this.

[0M4R]

Going to bump this, want feedback.

[Wildfire]

Going to bump this, want feedback.

No need to bump honestly, there isn't much posts in Video Design anyways

[Dismas]

Really well done. Like the white text and fonts you used. Didn't have audio.

[Customer]

I liked some of the animations used. Looks really good my man.

[Killpot]

There's a few places you could improve here:
- May 26th 2015 feels too drawn out
- None of the animation is really moving to the music, you don't have to do something every beat, but try to sync some things up to make it more immersive
- Andy Granner's name is hard as fuck to read, I'd suggest doing something about the font, I think outlines for the inside of the capital R, N, and A would suffice, as N's just look like rectangles
- During Cobra Starship, the circle distortion goes right in the middle of many people's heads, the main focus point of that frame, it feels off-putting and I don't know what I'm supposed to look at
- Flo Rida's name is hard to read against the sun, either outline the font or change the BG
- Overall there's just not enough to immerse someone, the text isn't doing anything, the logo's aren't doing anything, aside from the distortion effects on some of the reveals, it's just bland with not enough going on

[Despised]

Looks really nice, I like the used font.

[0M4R]

There's a few places you could improve here:
- May 26th 2015 feels too drawn out
- None of the animation is really moving to the music, you don't have to do something every beat, but try to sync some things up to make it more immersive
- Andy Granner's name is hard as fuck to read, I'd suggest doing something about the font, I think outlines for the inside of the capital R, N, and A would suffice, as N's just look like rectangles
- During Cobra Starship, the circle distortion goes right in the middle of many people's heads, the main focus point of that frame, it feels off-putting and I don't know what I'm supposed to look at
- Flo Rida's name is hard to read against the sun, either outline the font or change the BG
- Overall there's just not enough to immerse someone, the text isn't doing anything, the logo's aren't doing anything, aside from the distortion effects on some of the reveals, it's just bland with not enough going on

Thanks for the improvements my man and yes i know i should of matched animations to the music but i didn't really have time to do all that as my mate needed to hand it in before the deadline (which already passed lol).

[0M4R]

A good idea would to be playing the artists music when you show their name.

Yeah, i thought of that, however wasn't too sure how i should transition it.

[Serban]

Great work, keep it up. I really like your teaser video.