[MUST READ]The Black Eclipse - Book 1 Volume 1 07-22-2013, 11:40 AM
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Alright so before i start my own Book-Thread i would like to tell you guys that i made this just for fun, i would be posting a series of this and might make more books if i feel i should make more :p, so sit back relax and enjoy what i made.
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1. Lorelai Kingdom
2. The Fall of Mandor
When two kingdoms from the east lived with strife none can assume a peaceful one, two kingdoms rivaled with rage and chaos for the past century, rumbling through out the streets of Lorelai came out a man with stubbled beard, tall and old, he waved out his hands to the people cheering gracefully down the streets of Lorelai, he is King Mandor, both kingdoms Lorelai and Azaroth disputed since the wake of Malahki(Malah-kai),Azaroth lead by his own brother named Flissnaught an evil wizard who was trained by the Eight Shamans of the Cliffburry mountain , King Mandor never went along well with his own brother because of the previous history they went on, everything was fine until one day a simple parade became the most devastating event in Lorelai history.
Lorelai Kingdom
A kingdom built in well stone, a few tried to penetrate on its walls but failed to do because of its garanthum igenous rocks from the volcanoes of Ashenhagen, rich in tomatoes and live stock Lorelai had a good circulation on its economy. The finest blacksmiths can be found in the upper hill of the kingdom, a fancy clothes shop can be seen a few blocks away from the town center that sells fine linen of clothes that can be seen only in that place, people are ecstatic on their own living because of the daily perks and amenities they get from their own government.
King Mandor and his wife Juliana bore a son named Aslan, Aslan who grew up trained by the finest instructors on the land of Milline(Continent), Aslan who was molded hard by his father grew up kind-hearted to the society especially the poor and the needy.
Aslan won on many competitions at the age of 13, his father King Mandor was so proud that he gifted his own son a ruby encrusted sword engraved "A feux le madica"(A true warrior never surrenders), Aslan continue to pursue his skill in sword fighting and later switched to archery and horseback riding to maintain a good skill .
The Fall of Mandor
After the parade of the towns "New Beginning" that is held every year, people would go back to their homes with their family feasting on a new year to start off, Flissnaught ordered the high chief of the Azaroth Kingdom two days ago before the event started and told his right hand "Croisse duxe alna frase"(We shall commence the attack). Azeroth began to assemble the Crissnough ballistas that weighed a ton and fires deadly fireballs that can crush through thick walls, Flissnaught joined the high ranked infantry together with his right hand, almost ten thousand men gathered in the field excited to strike on the land of Lorelai.
An evening of silence celebrating the new beginning of another year when they heard *Boom* *Crash* ... Everyone panicked and went outside of their houses evacuating, an evening feast in the kings dining room in the castle of Lorelai stopped when they heard of the rampage kilometers away from the city, they could see fires spreading out in the vicinity, King Mandor yelled "Dexafuev!"(Fight!), Aslan and Juliana hugged King Mandor, before leaving King Mandor whispered to Aslan "Ala ruxue fe manituos" (This will not be the end), King Mandor as promised on his oath that the king will fight for his own kingdom, Flissnaught was waiting outside the castle meeting his own brother Mandor, they yelled, "Flissnaught tufue meha cluxe aliy fanta"(Flissnaught! why are you doing this?, you shall pay), "Ala carleax yut funiya mel cahor"(You shall pay for your own filth), Mandor shouted at Flissnaught "Ala ka mau gexia fal tovous dexafuev"(Then i guess ill have to fight you), Mandor drew out his sword and slashed it on Flissnaught, but Flissnaught destroyed the sword using his own magic saying "Falaki" , the sword became dust.
Mandor shocked on his brothers power and said "Ixocius moix fax?"(What have you done?), "Palaivous as witoux"(The power is with me), he spelled out the "Calorinousseue" and took Mandor's soul and stabbed it in its heart as the physical body and spirit made out a paradox on its own self, Flissnaught said "Ravious halax"(Goodbye brother).
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I hope you enjoyed my book, i made it all in 2 days and used my mind extensively, all imagination and no plagiarism, If you want to ask something just PM me and i can answer it here or you can talk to me in Skype, i wont give out spoilers but you could ask anything in this book if you are unclear on something,Ill be making more volumes and i might make sequels, i hope you enjoyed it, Thanks for reading!
Copyright Greed © 2013
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The Black Eclipse
By
Greed
Unknown Location
July 21, 2013
Greed
Unknown Location
July 21, 2013
I dedicate this book to my mates here in Discussion Zone. For Krew who i can't pay $13(sorry about that) and to Blue who made this all possible(I cant post this without the forum).
Table Of Contents
1. Lorelai Kingdom
2. The Fall of Mandor
Introduction
When two kingdoms from the east lived with strife none can assume a peaceful one, two kingdoms rivaled with rage and chaos for the past century, rumbling through out the streets of Lorelai came out a man with stubbled beard, tall and old, he waved out his hands to the people cheering gracefully down the streets of Lorelai, he is King Mandor, both kingdoms Lorelai and Azaroth disputed since the wake of Malahki(Malah-kai),Azaroth lead by his own brother named Flissnaught an evil wizard who was trained by the Eight Shamans of the Cliffburry mountain , King Mandor never went along well with his own brother because of the previous history they went on, everything was fine until one day a simple parade became the most devastating event in Lorelai history.
Lorelai Kingdom
A kingdom built in well stone, a few tried to penetrate on its walls but failed to do because of its garanthum igenous rocks from the volcanoes of Ashenhagen, rich in tomatoes and live stock Lorelai had a good circulation on its economy. The finest blacksmiths can be found in the upper hill of the kingdom, a fancy clothes shop can be seen a few blocks away from the town center that sells fine linen of clothes that can be seen only in that place, people are ecstatic on their own living because of the daily perks and amenities they get from their own government.
King Mandor and his wife Juliana bore a son named Aslan, Aslan who grew up trained by the finest instructors on the land of Milline(Continent), Aslan who was molded hard by his father grew up kind-hearted to the society especially the poor and the needy.
Aslan won on many competitions at the age of 13, his father King Mandor was so proud that he gifted his own son a ruby encrusted sword engraved "A feux le madica"(A true warrior never surrenders), Aslan continue to pursue his skill in sword fighting and later switched to archery and horseback riding to maintain a good skill .
The Fall of Mandor
After the parade of the towns "New Beginning" that is held every year, people would go back to their homes with their family feasting on a new year to start off, Flissnaught ordered the high chief of the Azaroth Kingdom two days ago before the event started and told his right hand "Croisse duxe alna frase"(We shall commence the attack). Azeroth began to assemble the Crissnough ballistas that weighed a ton and fires deadly fireballs that can crush through thick walls, Flissnaught joined the high ranked infantry together with his right hand, almost ten thousand men gathered in the field excited to strike on the land of Lorelai.
An evening of silence celebrating the new beginning of another year when they heard *Boom* *Crash* ... Everyone panicked and went outside of their houses evacuating, an evening feast in the kings dining room in the castle of Lorelai stopped when they heard of the rampage kilometers away from the city, they could see fires spreading out in the vicinity, King Mandor yelled "Dexafuev!"(Fight!), Aslan and Juliana hugged King Mandor, before leaving King Mandor whispered to Aslan "Ala ruxue fe manituos" (This will not be the end), King Mandor as promised on his oath that the king will fight for his own kingdom, Flissnaught was waiting outside the castle meeting his own brother Mandor, they yelled, "Flissnaught tufue meha cluxe aliy fanta"(Flissnaught! why are you doing this?, you shall pay), "Ala carleax yut funiya mel cahor"(You shall pay for your own filth), Mandor shouted at Flissnaught "Ala ka mau gexia fal tovous dexafuev"(Then i guess ill have to fight you), Mandor drew out his sword and slashed it on Flissnaught, but Flissnaught destroyed the sword using his own magic saying "Falaki" , the sword became dust.
Mandor shocked on his brothers power and said "Ixocius moix fax?"(What have you done?), "Palaivous as witoux"(The power is with me), he spelled out the "Calorinousseue" and took Mandor's soul and stabbed it in its heart as the physical body and spirit made out a paradox on its own self, Flissnaught said "Ravious halax"(Goodbye brother).
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I hope you enjoyed my book, i made it all in 2 days and used my mind extensively, all imagination and no plagiarism, If you want to ask something just PM me and i can answer it here or you can talk to me in Skype, i wont give out spoilers but you could ask anything in this book if you are unclear on something,Ill be making more volumes and i might make sequels, i hope you enjoyed it, Thanks for reading!
Copyright Greed © 2013
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