[Kureo]

Thanks KaareK, I don't think there is too much text?

And I will add a background pattern soon.

There may not be too much text, but I would still add some sort of images.
As the consumer, your attention gets caught by the images. mile:

Not really, a thread design is an informative picture to inform you of a service. Though pictures are a nice addition, its far from needed as you are not giving out a lot of information through them. Often they also take to much attention so that people don't bother to read all of the text closely enough.

[Exiled]

Was the CPU pen tooled in there? The rest of the thread design looks ridiculously fab.