[Black Haze]

I'll never see what lies beneath.
Your sick twisted smile.
So you turn the tide on me,
because you're so unkind.
I will always be here.
For the rest of my life.
When I close my eye's.
I dream of Oceans bleeding into the skies
It's a place where Angels scream and Devil's cry.

[Mom]

Did you write this? It's pretty good.

Feels like I've heard it somewhere though, oddly.

[Eclipse]

If you wrote that, I'm impressed. Thanks for sharing anyway. I loved it.

[Black Haze]

Did you write this? It's pretty good.
Feels like I've heard it somewhere though, oddly.

You most likely have heard all these words some where, as they are all music lyric's I have combined from a few different songs in to a dark Poem, with my own added touch at the very end. Thanks though.

If you wrote that, I'm impressed. Thanks for sharing anyway. I loved it.

Glad you enjoyed it. As I stated above, that's how it was written. If it was solely created by me. I would put "-By Me". I take no credit for the song lyric's, only the very last part of the Poem. Though, I can write my own Dark Poems without using song lyic's.